Well starting off pretty obvious. Poison for the people.
I chose the topic because of the overwhelming amount of gossip in my country. We have multiple expressions for people who gossip, and it simply is a part of our everyday life, which kind of unnerves me. So, my frustrations in vision, welcome and have fun ;).
Arthaus: I chose you because I liked your earlier work, and I think we can do good :)
I like the colors on this a lot; they contrast just enough but not strikingly so, so my eye stays with the content. I think the serpent (big black blobby shadow thing?) could use a little more definition, but otherwise, nice place to begin.
OK, neshill, cheers :)
Like I said, I’ve been pretty busy, but not one to turn down a logue. So, gimme a bit of time. Besides, I think I still need to get my head round this theme.
It looks like a good start to me, although the body copy having a comma after every word is a bit distracting, but then again, I’m a bit of a pedant, so don’t mind me ;)
As cJw has said, the colours are very nice, and as you’ve already stated, it’s a bit of an obvious start, but it seems well executed and a good start nonetheless.
You just get abstract as you go on :). The text, which is quite unreadable, is actualy the dictionary definition of the word gossip. You are really amazed when you take a look at the synonyms the word has.
Anyway, I’m really looking forward to the response. Loved your work on the Twilight Zone.
cJw: Thanks. The shadowyness of the serpent is quite purposely there, considering the fact that I have some nice plans for the future ;)
…The shadowyness of the serpent is quite purposely there, considering the fact that I have some nice plans for the future…
We’ll have to see about that ;-)